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Jordan
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Jordan asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

How do u like these poems that i wrote?

Ok, i have been writing a lot of poems recently, and i wanted an opinion on some of them:

Rich leaves fill the ground

Autumn tranquility stirs

Sunlight dreams again

Laughter fills the air

The earth is full and nurtured

Heat radiates joy.

so what do u think? yeah, these r haikus, sooooo....

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  • 1 decade ago
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    dreams of nature

  • Cup
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    I like them. Rich words. Nice imagery.

  • 1 decade ago

    Not bad and not so good. Revise it again.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    ....sooo no...

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