DON'T Give in to the thought, Okay?

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"Suicide is Death's Whore"

DON'T let her lure you
with her sweet calmness
and her innocent grin
She'll open wide 
and let you in

she's all but innocent
in her flirtatious way
like going with her
makes it all okay

when she motions to you
fight with all your might
run don't walk
she'll get her share tonight

sometimes we think
she's the way to go
but fight this B**ch
and just say NO

cause in the end 
she'll win somehow
she's no innocent, I promise
this whore of death

she's standing there
just to inhale your last breath

Anonymous · Accepted Answer

I honestly think this should be on billboards and subway stations, and schools, etc.  I really feel it can save many who read it.  

(...was once an almost victim, myself)

Bella Hunt · Answer

I absolutely adore this poem! It completely captures my attention! The only thing that I would change is the B**ch part, change it to a word that is more appropriate, and then anybody will feel right reading it, even younger people! I can't say enough about how much I love your poem, though!

THE BANNIBAL ONE · Answer

This is just OK..The message up to personal opinion.
I have personal experience with a number of friends,
deciding for THEMSELVES what they wanted.
I am not to judge,they may be in a better place.
For others with a "shred of hope and a life
without constant pain and nothing.I see your point.
I still sense them,so all wasn't lost..

lovechild · Answer

talk about STD's WHEW! You made tghat message clear, good job, because the allure to some people of suicidal ideation is rendered very lame and foolish by your poem.

? · Answer

Superlike !!
Flawless creation.

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