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shirleyf asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 10 years ago

DON'T Give in to the thought, Okay?

"Suicide is Death's Whore"

DON'T let her lure you

with her sweet calmness

and her innocent grin

She'll open wide

and let you in

she's all but innocent

in her flirtatious way

like going with her

makes it all okay

when she motions to you

fight with all your might

run don't walk

she'll get her share tonight

sometimes we think

she's the way to go

but fight this B**ch

and just say NO

cause in the end

she'll win somehow

she's no innocent, I promise

this whore of death

she's standing there

just to inhale your last breath

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  • Anonymous
    10 years ago
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    I honestly think this should be on billboards and subway stations, and schools, etc. I really feel it can save many who read it.

    (...was once an almost victim, myself)

  • 10 years ago

    I absolutely adore this poem! It completely captures my attention! The only thing that I would change is the B**ch part, change it to a word that is more appropriate, and then anybody will feel right reading it, even younger people! I can't say enough about how much I love your poem, though!

  • 10 years ago

    This is just OK..The message up to personal opinion.

    I have personal experience with a number of friends,

    deciding for THEMSELVES what they wanted.

    I am not to judge,they may be in a better place.

    For others with a "shred of hope and a life

    without constant pain and nothing.I see your point.

    I still sense them,so all wasn't lost..

    Source(s): 1,2,3,4,5,>>>
  • 10 years ago

    talk about STD's WHEW! You made tghat message clear, good job, because the allure to some people of suicidal ideation is rendered very lame and foolish by your poem.

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  • 10 years ago

    Superlike !!

    Flawless creation.

  • 10 years ago

    ...interesting concept

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