She looks upon the world, but does not see hateful crimes stealing life, love, money, family.
She sees colors of life with each vision that crosses her view; free of humanity's waste.
The golden glow of a waning sun slipping below the horizon as stars twinkle in the east with the slightly visible crescent moon.
She hears the color coded leaves blowing in the winds as season changes caress her skin and touch her heart and soul.
Listening to the melody of the night sensations stir and she writes of the beauty that is hidden to Earth's wretched minions. ~~
Caz :) x2012-03-30T23:22:42Z
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This is a truly wonderful poem came strait from your heart and that's what matters. the language of poetry the ability to formulate our thoughts , disability is a gift sometimes, if it happens by injury it's the way god wants it, he helps us to find support and serch for treatmen
Listening to the melody of the night sensations stir and she writes of the beauty that is hidden to Earth's wretched minions.
I presume you are describing someone who chooses to see the best in others and ignores the baser parts of the human existence. If so, you did well. The thought also occurred that you might be describing a female Deity such as Oprah often says she believes in, but I seriously doubt that to be the case. If I am wrong, then the descriptions in the poem are understated for an omniscient being.
I do think you need a title longer than one word. SHE conjures up the idea of the female tyrant in the many movies of the same name (the last one I saw many years ago starred Ursula Andress-I think).
Your poem is well written with superb imagery. I can see the sunset with the crescent moon showing. I love the expression color coded leaves which speak volumes about fall.
I hope this is what she sees in her world. I'd like it to be mine as well. .
A beautiful response to the question asked. I did need to read the question to better understand the poem, but once in that space I was transfixed by the way this poem responds to it.