C/C This Haiku if you would be so kind?
my bare skin still holds warmth
from the sun in that field where
we first freely felt.
my bare skin still holds warmth
from the sun in that field where
we first freely felt.
Kirby
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The 'f's twisted me up. Not bad though.
Sam
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TheLongArmOfTheShortbus
haikus are fun, but
they sometimes don't make much sense
refrigerator
Caraline
I would change the last line.