Afternoon Haiku For You/ C/C?

Enjoyed it!---G-----can we get your willow to weep beer? Liked the word conjour.---------------william

Which of us likes high-cooze better is an open question.

Hidey hole for tears

Salix Babylonica's

pendulous branches.

Knew It!

Your work is so witty and sometimes - equally- edgy

that I think an `Approach With Awareness` ought precede each posting.

This haiku is not an exception.

9 (Ouch!).

I will desist from a comment *peers peripherally over shoulder* but that

it touches a part of one which other (- - - - - - - ) can never even envision as existent! :)

*frowns* I didn`t know it`s a tree!

I see NOW, how this sheds - Beauty..compliments.

9.5 minus (Ouch!) .

Willow,, dear, is sound asleep.

You need some smelling salts to weep,

or chop an onion into chunks.

White willow bark helps hungover drunks.

Or a nip of the hair of the cur

A friend is needed

A caress with soft lamb's ear

On a burning cheek

I'd like to conjure

A huge prehistoric sloth

The world will be ours!

Gems

Prize Haiku you woman of the world. Hey, can I borrow

your avatar the next time I do a Haiku? I swear !

You have set up the juxtaposition on Lines one and three,

and your kireji, your cutting word which helps bring the

juxtapose together, is definitely on line two.

Bravo missy

Ah the weeping willow, Gem. How lovely and so visual.

wow! Very witty, visually pleasing and a great use of language!

Just lovely...