My English is not good. Need help.?

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Read about a job opening on the internet looking for a Technician. So I wanted to say that I was excited to read about the job opening and that they are looking for a technician. In a shorter and simpler sentences. Is this correct?

I was excited to read that you're looking for a Technician.

It doesn't sound right. As if something was missing. Any suggestion?

Anonymous · Answer

Dear Sirs:

I read your ad about the open position of technician.  I would like to schedule an interview with you at your earliest convenience.   Enclosed is my resume, and cover letter.   Please call me, I am anxious to meet you and be a part of your team.

Thank you for your time.

Ken Lee

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