Can someone give me a "show not tell" paragraph ?

Tell Sentence : The new student was lonely.

I want a "Show" paragraph describing the student with sensory details. Please I really need help :)

Zelle2013-09-23T23:30:27Z

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The new student sat by herself (himself) in a corner desk. Her shoulders slumped and she looked steadily at the desk with wide frightened eyes. The teacher droned on and on. The other students in the class were making a lot of noise, laughing and yelling but the new student didn't have anyone to talk to. From time to time she sighed.

Hope this helped!

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