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Can you critique my short film?
I made this for fun with some friends in my dorm. It's called "Better Off Alone" and tells the story of one man's quest to get the ladies with his dance moves.
Watch it here and tell me what you think:
5 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
For an amateur film it is not bad. What you need to work on is transition, more fades or swipes, it will make it look more polished. In the bathroom scene, it seems that you had the correct angle for the mirror shot, however it seems like you left a camera in the shower. I think your experiment comes off well and interesting enough. Keep on at it.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
i watched for about 3 or 4 minutes and was really bored. If your wanting to experiment further, i recommend you start off with shorter films to keep interest, and when you get better then shoot for longer ones.
- MischelleLv 41 decade ago
I watched the first minute then realized there were 9 more so I stopped watching it because I can't put up with that song for that long. Sorry.
- ?Lv 45 years ago
I enjoyed it sufficient to grant you your first thumbs up. particularly clever and creepy to be so short. nicely shot, too. And to the guy who's writing the hyperlink down: in simple terms replica and paste the hyperlink. it particularly is lots greater handy.
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