Newly composed song lyrics....opinions?

There's a melody that goes along...but you can't hear it here.... I would like to have honest feedback about the lyrics even though you can't hear the song. Go ahead and be nasty...I'm looking for honest impressions, responses....if it says nothing to you...that's fine...and worth knowing. Thanks.

Just beneath the surface

This is where I've been

Though I sink so slowly

I don't want to swim

Current take me, take

I peacefully give in

But let me come to the surface again.

There above the water

I have seen you fly

I have seen you pause there

looking through my eyes

Did you see me drown? I

think I saw you smile

and then you fluttered on by.

Here below the surface

this is where I hide.

I think I would have loved you

when I was alive.

Current take me to you

if only for a while.

I can't keep a butterfly.

And underneath this surface

there's

a brutal man

you'll never know

I've chained myself to

kindness .

Chained myself

to a sinking stone

Love me, don't, I can't,

I

love you, let me go.

I promise,

I will

forget all

I know.