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letter of introduction?

Please help :

I want to write something like

Dear Sir, Madam

it is with the utmost pleasure and pride that I dare send you (submit you) my article...

to an editor,

please help me change it to something a little better and a little more "english-like"

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  • maî
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    Before you send the cover letter, do some research. Find out who you're sending it to. Dear Sir or Madam does not cut it. You write the letter to the exact person who will be receiving it. Editors are listed in magazine mastheads, and in writers guidelines, and usually online on a magazine's website. READ THEIR SUBMISSION GUIDELINES.

    If you don't bother to even find out who you're mailing to, why should they bother to read it?

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    http://www.underdown.org/mf-cover-and-query-letter...

    http://oem.bmjjournals.com/ifora/layout.dtl#cover_...

    discussion list about cover letters:

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    This place offers free templates that download to your computer; (they're resume style cover letters however):

    http://www.southworth.com/page.php?id=187

    This individual has some quality input on cover letters:

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  • 1 decade ago

    Dear Sir or Madam:

    I am so delighted that you are requesting my article. I am very pleased to know that you would like to receive it.

    or

    Dear Sir or Madam:

    It is with utmost pleasure and pride that I send you my article.

    That sounds good to. I would go with that one. Go with your first instinct. Just don't use to many non-English-like words. Dare isn't something that we use in a sentence to often like that.

  • ?
    Lv 4
    4 years ago

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  • 1 decade ago

    In this corner put the address

    Ex.

    To. Mrs Jefferson

    Office of Registrar

    University of the Philippines

    Diliman, Quezon City

    Sir/Madam

    Greetings!

    I __(your name)__ from ______, would like to submit this article in title of _______, The main theme article is ____________, it was provide by information i have gather and i ensure that all of this are true. I appreciate if you give your time to read my article.

    Thank you and hoping for your consideration.

    Resfectfully Yours;

    _______________

    Your address

    Contact #

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  • 1 decade ago

    Dear (Name the person):

    Spiel on why you should be sending them this article in the first place. (20 words appx)

    .. your publication which is the cutting edge etc...

    Please find attached to this letter my article 'name' about (15 words. description only)

    I hope this is the beginning/continuation (as your case is) of our fruitful creative collaboration

    regards

  • 1 decade ago

    Senders full address:

    Date.

    Re: Article on Senile Dementia - humerous.

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    Attached please find my article on the above subject which I respectfully submit for consideration for publication in Women's Weekly.

    Yours truly,

    Mamarurucoco (signature)

    Printed name............

    (Regarding your draft - always remember that self praise is no praise at all. Be business like and stick to the point..........)

  • 1 decade ago

    Just my opinion, but I'd avoid that syrupy language. Be concise and business-like.

    "Mr. [insert name here]

    I'm submitting the enclosed article for your consideration."

    Of course, depending on the market you could go the other way and write it as flowery as you can.

    "Dear sir, my heart doth leap with joy

    To speak with you regarding

    A missive taut, that I have wrought

    And you won't be discarding."

    On second thought, maybe it's best to stick with bussiness-like. ;)

    JMB

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