Will you give me constructive criticism on my poem?

I'm no expert, but I like it ;-)

Do your wants matter "YES"

Should you ask "YES"

Give him the poem

You only live once dear and if he's THE ONE then you'll walk off into the sunset and live happilly ever after. Otherwise you'll go on with life and meet another spirit you can love.

There is only one thing that makes poetry real and beautiful is that it comes from the heart and mind of a beautiful spirit and you've got it !!

It was a really good well written poem. ( It's nice to finally read something that isn't misspelled!) Keep up the good work!

I think it's pretty good....not the type i usually like. But it's good. i'd give it about an 8.5 out of 10.

Happy for you

That he said 'Yes'.

You had your wants

But look beyond his lips and words.

Are they temporary

Or are they for good?

Only time will tell

And you'll have to find that out yourself :-)

i like the concept. i really liked the seventh line. i just wanted the next line to flow with it sound wise. hey play with.

hoped i encouraged

That's lovely dear, and a true sentiment to anyone who has gone through that.....Thanks for sharing.......

I think you should call Beau.