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To Whom It May Concern..

Don't know if I can make the grade,

It's been so long since the fade.

Writing poems was my pastime,

Now I wonder in my blurred mind,

If I could even make a rhyme.

The one I love has disappeared,

He doesn't want to even be near,

Or close enough to talk in prose,

So I have decided just to close,

The heart that was so full of him.

It was overflowing to the brim.

Now I cry day and night,

So much for love it took a flight,

Into the blue up above,

Flying free like a dove,

Pure and white and so carefree,

Evidently done and over with me......

He looks at me then looks away,

His walk is now slower with a sway.

The warrior I knew is no longer there,

He seems down trodden and unaware,

Of love that hovers still for thee,

To last throughout eternity.......

Written on 11/09/06 by tinkerbelleswish

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