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Tell me often that you love me,Through your talk,your actions and your gesturesDon't assume that i know it.I may show signs of embarrassment and even deny that i need it. Do it anyway. Compiment me often for job's well done and don't downgrade but reassure me when i fail.Don't take the many thing's i do for granted.Postive reinforcments and appreciation works toward making sure i repeat them.Let me know when you feel low or lonely or misunderstood.It will make me stronger to know i have the power to comfort you.Feelings unverblized can be destructive.Remember though I Love you ,I still can't always read your mindExpress joyous thoughts and feelings.They bring virtality to our relationship.It's wonderful to celebrate, non birthdays,personal Valentines day's.Give gifts of love with out reason and hear you verbalize your happiness.When you respond to me so i feel special ,it will make up for all those during the day who passed me up and did not even see me.Don't invalidate my being by telling me that what i see or feel is insignificant or not real. If i see it and feel it for me it's my experiance and therefore imporant and real.Listen to me without Judgement or preconception.Being heard ,like being seen is vital. If you truley see me and hear me as i am at that moment is is a continued affirmation of my being as we help each other to change.Touch me ,Hold me,Hug me, My physical self is revitalized by loving non verbal communication.

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You know what if you have something bad to say keep on clicking.If you can not say somethiong nice then do not say anything at all

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I copied it from my 360 that is why it is not in columns and i do have several poems published online and in books

angela chase · Accepted Answer

I would agree that it is a soliloquy but its not bad. its just kind of hard to read, brake it down in to columns. don't let others discourage you from writing though. remember "those who cant do, teach" so like...those telling you that your work is bad probably have never written anything or have any emotion at all. your emotions, all emotions are beautiful.

Lydia C · Answer

It's not really a poem, though I guess the free-form could be your style. It's difficult to read, but there are some good thoughts there. I've written and published poetry so I know that the feelings of a poet run deep and you've opened up a lot here, but it feels more like a letter to someone, and even then it needs some work to flow well and be something pleasant to consider. If someone handed this to me I would feel like I'd been hit by a ton of bricks and I'd need to shut myself in a closet for awhile to cogitate all of it.

sandlin · Answer

For me a poem has to have rhythm. It does not unavoidably could rhyme even even though it desires to hit my thoughts. i think of readability of expression is important besides. i do no longer choose to 2d wager what i'm examining approximately. I continually seek for what I term "poetic gem stones"in the textual content textile.

tigerlily_catmom · Answer

I love it...well done...very good poem with a lot of feeling...keep up the good work!

oldyogi · Answer

Chop it up into about thirty cheesy Hallmark cards and it's fine.

Pie&#39;s_Guy · Answer

That is NOT a poem, it is a soliloquy, and a poor one at that.
(some things need to stay in your diary.)  Overall Grade 'F'

▒Яenée▒ · Answer

Yes it's good

Anonymous · Answer

It's not bad - kinda long and maybe if you put it in columns - but not bad at all

sparkleworks · Answer

I love it... but i dont speak english.

Anonymous · Answer

I like it. I would give you a 93.4 %

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