heres another poem, any opinions?

this poem has no title, but if u have some sugestions that would b great, and what do you think of it, thanks for any opinions

as the ice melts away

the water from its contents

drips down into the soil

encasing what ever my lie

beneath the cold hard ice

but as the ice begins to fade

new life is found sprouting

up from the soil

flourishing from the remains

of the ice that shielded it

from danger for many years

growing and growing

the life takes new form

almost ready to bloom

and show everyone

the true colors that resides

it may die and wither

but the thick ice

that protected it for

all these years

provided enough time to mature

so when the life springs

to full growth and maturity

for all to see

all will stop

and see great beauty

every one wonders why

it was hidden deep beneath the world

cold and dark

but then one thinks

to soon and it may have

only been as common as a flower

and not as beautiful as a drea