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does this sound right?
gum
chewy, sticky, popping
smacking in my mouth
bubblicious
this is called a cinquain im doing my poems does it sound right and how can i change if it doesnt sound right
6 Answers
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
it sounds fine too me...
- mooseLv 51 decade ago
Change chewy to chewing, sticky to sticking and change bubblicious to something else. That word is used for name of gum and you don't want to get sued if you plan on publishing the poem. Try (Oh, my blouse).
- salingerLv 41 decade ago
I like every line except the last. -icious is out as a suffix. Its been WAY overused. I think your poem would be better if you could think of a more original adjective for the last word. I sincerely do like it, though!
- Anonymous1 decade ago
mafi marone
