What do you think about my Mom poem?

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This poem was written at a sad time in my life, when I lost my Mother to a massive heart attack.
                                              MOM
You were always there in every way
When your children needed you.
You always tried to cheer us up
When we were feeling blue.
When we were feeling down and out
You always had a smile
And when you offered a helping hand
You'd go that extra mile.
Your smiling face is one of the things
We all will surely miss
But every one of us know
That yuo're in Heavenly Bliss.
God called you home that Friday night
Because he needed you
He knew your work here on this earth
Was now fianlly through.
We'll miss you Mom but we know
It won't be very long
That we'll meet again in Heaven 
To join you in Praise and Song.

In Loving Memory of my Mom
Ruth Ray Lee
April 22, 1935 - December 17, 2004

kissertoni · Accepted Answer

it's a heart warming poem..i think eventhough i didn't have the chance to knew her..i felt like a know her already by your poem...and i know you really miss her....

Anonymous · Answer

I think this is a beautiful poem. Well composed because its straight from the heart and conjures up your feelings and emotions to the way how you felt. .Why not put it in a frame with a picture of your Mum at the top of poem..Have it professionally printed with the photo inserted and hang it in a favorite spot in your mums memory..God Bless.

peekabugaboo · Answer

Beautiful.

booboobearus · Answer

your mom would be proud.
I say this out loud.
as a mom myself I read aloud,
I cried, I smiled, I felt proud.

you are such a talented poet, and sometimes it takes a loved one crossing over to bring it out. keep writing and have this one published. every one who lost a mom can relate. I know I did.  (mine went the same way) Thankyou so much for poem.

Captain Mozar · Answer

It shows your love,and devotion to your Mom. I am quite sure that she is still with you ,and all while boasting to the other Angels on how wonderful of a daughter you are to her.
                                 Sorry for the loss.

mrsdeli · Answer

Nice

Anonymous · Answer

That's a beautiful tribute!  I'm so sorry you lost your mom...but I'm sure she loved you and would be very proud of you

Dylan Ellsworth · Answer

You Spelled Your wrong, but otherwise I think That It is a great poem. I can actually feel from your writting your mood. 
Much better than I can do.

djkfa · Answer

Beautiful poem about your mom. I'm so sorry you've lost her.

Anonymous · Answer

WoW your a sweet little girl and I hope you stay that way, I am sorry you lost your moma.

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What do you think about my Mom poem?

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