Research Paper Thesis help?

Here is a link for a great YouTube video on Puppy Mills for you to watch - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2HM8UmHM8Uo&mode=re...

Here is the question that the video was posted in - There are a lot of great answers that will help you better understand Pet Shops and Puppy Mills - http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AtNQ6...

Edit - If you buy from a "responsible" breeder (NOT Backyard - Classify them with Puppy Mills because they are just out to make a buck) you are working with someone that 1) Is an expert in their breed 2) Strives to breed dogs to "Standard" and better the breed 3) does not care about the money involved and often breaks even or looses money on a litter 4) Cares about the welfare of their puppies and is very choosy about who they sell to 5) Will take that pup back for life if there is some reason you can no longer care for it

The list goes on...I'll let you research from there : )

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Now, after reading a sample or 2 from the link provided, you can now start making your own thesis or thesis statement. You have to remember that in making a thesis or thesis statement, it has to be concise. Quality is way much better than quantity. And of course, the outcome of the thesis will be best when the chosen topic will be the once that you love most, or your intrigued in something that you are dying to know. It would be a lot more fun if you make it that way. So now, when you are going to start, read along these quick but detailed helpful tips on how to choose a topic and how to make a thesis. This will help you a lot as you go along. http://www.coursework4you.co.uk/How_to_Find_Good_D...

If you are writing a 5 paragraph paper your thesis statement should say ... then : and say your three topic you will be discussing below is a basic one Manifest destiny did hurt the Native Americans, although America had to expand and improve: land, economically and politically. then in the following paragraph talk about land aquired then economically then politically if your not writing a 5 paragraph essay then this format will not work but i was just taking a guess

Don't breed or buy while pets in shelters die. Leave the breeding to responsible breeders who will uphold breed standards.

You sound very bright and well-informed. I'm sure you will think of something on your own (and you will feel more accomplished)...good luck.