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JOHN M asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

My poem Part two?

The tracks of my tears (Part Two)

To you Yours

To me mine.

New friends & places,

Strange abscences,

Secrets,

Lies and long for freedoms,

Stolen, stuccatto messages

Within our homely carnage made.

Brooding darkness,

Fearfull madness,

Lost in this feral wilderness,

Blown in angry, changing times,

My compass anchored pole deep,

No wind to take me to my destination,

No guide, no chart........ no chance.

Open door,

Guilt written plain,

Questions fended too simply to withstand,

Lies an open invitation,

Waiting to be heard,

His name is me,

But funnier……

Just too much comedy,

My love,

For me and mine.

3 Answers

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  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    Very good, I like it! Loved both part 1 and 2!

  • 1 decade ago

    Not so bad, but I am just a common woman, not a critic

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Okay , I read it .

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