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Hate Her :~

This is a story bout my best friend

Her name is little Miss Natasya,

She's the pretiest girl in the class,

But she's such a drama queen,

Well rite now, she's the person I hate the most

She did bad things behind my back,

She played me like some fool,

And that's why she doesn't know that...

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I hate her!

She stole my boyfriend

She kicked my other friends,

She even made me cry in front of the whole class, Ohhhh

She made fun of everyone,

She likes to push people away,

She hurts people's feeling for no damn reason!

Well I hope she will fall from a bridge,

Get eaten by a maneating shark,

Get electricuted by a lightning,

Get stabbed with a ONE GRAND knife,

But the part is that's she's still walking with her little 2 f*****g feet

Yesterday she is a nice girl,

Today she is a bad girl,

I guess tommorow she will be the devil's assistant,

Everyday she is getting more worst,

And that's why she doesn't know that...