can you check this plz?

As with other writers on here, I find your copyright at the bottom of your poem adorable. Don't worry, no one is gonna steal your poem.

Bill is right in that you can do much better at being creative with your layout, but since you used a poetry helper tool, I'm assuming you're not very experienced at writing poetry. In that case, don't treat this as your finished poem: use this poem to create something better.

Take the ideas of this poem and change them. For example, the first lines could change to something like:

All I want is someone to laugh;

A slow smile bubbling up from quiet reflection,

Laughter surfacing like ripples on a pond.

Use images, sounds, smells to describe the ideas of the poem instead of just saying the same things over and over.

I counted six "All I want" and ten "Someone."

I think you can be more original than that.

It is suprising how many words you can use and say so little. This selfish poem drones out what you want and I wonder what this someone gets in return. Yet I sense that isn't your intent.

All in all I think you can do better than this....

It's beautiful. You were born to write poetry.

your peom is awesome but i think it needs more emotion more feeling my poems also need to show more emotion thats what many good poerty writers lack feeling . like the other person has to feel it also

beautiful but poetry can only get u so far in life....sorry i have tried