what do you think about my poem?

tell me honsetly what u think about my poem i wrote for my dad

to my daddy

daddy i love you no matter what they say

I'm not going to lie i wanted to push you away

now daddy all i want is you by my side

but your running away from me so you can hide

what did i do what did i say

that would make you runaway?

remember i will still be your kid no matter how much you hate me

why did it all start just because someone wanted to date me?

I'm gonna forgive you for what you said and what you done

but are you still gonna run?

why do you feel so much hate for me all i need is my daddy here

now don't you see, isn't it clear

all i want is my daddy around like it was before

but i guess all you think about me is that I'm a whore

but if you open your eyes if you could just see

color shouldn't matter if you love someone but that's just me

daddy come back i need you in my life

cuz I'm getting ready to be somebodies wife

don't you wanna walk me down the isle

it wont be long just in a little while

don't let me down I've had enough

I'm not gonna lie its been really rough

but i can live without you

though it would be really nice to have you

just don't wait to long

cuz i might just be gone