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Fran M asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Rate my poem?

I grasp the succulent plum --- steady, my hand, and sure.

I bite.

Juice. Deep, purple.

Come with me, my lover.

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  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    i give it a 6

  • 1 decade ago

    4

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    On a scale of 1 to 10, 1 being horrendous and 10 being super-fantastic amazing, I give your poem a:

    3.

  • 1 decade ago

    i honestly really like it. it has little there but so much behind it! really good!

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