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Could a native English speaker correct the mistakes in this text and make it sound better?Thanks in advance.?

He is one of our poets who coalesces the universal values in the pot of socialist poetry. He involves his poems in every subject related to humans and different lives. Therefore, memories, trips, actual facts flow into his poems from a course created by an exquisite observation.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    He is one of the poets of our time who coalesces the universal values in the pot of socialist poetry. His poems are involved in every subject related to humans and their different lives. Therefore, memories, trips and actual facts flow into his poems from a course created by an exquisite observation.

    Only a few changes - it was really good. Well done!

  • A.V.R.
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    He is a poet, who coalesces universal values in the pot of socialist poetry. His poems involve every aspect of human lives. Therefore, memories, trips, and actual facts flow into his poems from a course set by an exquisite observer.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    He is one of our poets who can coalesce the universal values as expressed through socialist poetry. He centers his poems on varied subjects related to mankind and the wide range of differences that can be found in every human life. He intertwines a myriad of memories along with actual facts and thoughts and emotions to flow into his poems, creating this poetic state with his exquisite sense of observation.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Actually, there are a lot of mistakes and the last sentence doesn't make sense.

    He is one of our _______ poets who (Do you really know what coalesces means? or are you just using "heavier" words?) manages to bring together universal human values with socialist poetry in his writings. His poems encompasses subjects related to mankind as well as different aspects of their lives. Hence through the poet's unique and astute observation, memories, trips and factual events are fluidly reflected in his writings.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    was going to help you out.. but then you went and posted this question one time to many.. If you press the button more then one.. it not gonna make the elevator come faster dude..

  • SkurdJ
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    it are sounding ok be to me! ;)

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