Will you please tell me what you think of this unfinished song I am writing?

I haven't felt this way...... in several days...... and it's all because of you.......So, when I see you standing there...... I just look up at you and stare......... oooh............stare..................

Every time I look you in your eye..... It just makes me want to cry.... and if you want to know why..... Then I mustn't tell you a lie..... and the reason is because after all those years we spent together.... one day you just decided to leave me forever.... and I'm just still missing you because I thought our love was true..... And now that I know I was wrong... I'm just writing this song.... and if you ever want to come back to live with me then please.... babe...... feel free.

By the way, "............." just means that you sing that word longer than the rest....or hold it longer than the rest. Also, I would like to let you know that I play the piano, guitar (both electric and acoustic), and the violin. So, I can write my own music to the songs I am working on.