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Can native English speakers help me? Does this paragraph make sense in English,if not can you correct it?
Whenever I start reading a book, I feel as if I were a small fish lost in the ocean. I never know where I am and where I am being drifted into. I just try to find something interesting through the words with some sort of astonishment and lostness. Then,suddenly I find myself having taken the bait of the author; I am stil on the hook if the novel is good. If not, having been slipped from the hook, distracted, forgotten where I am, I begin to browse through the lines.
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- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Whenever I start reading a book, I feel as if I were a small fish lost in the ocean. I never know where I am or where im being drifted to. I try to find something interesting in the words and suddenly I find I have taken the bait of the author. I stay on the hook if the novel is good. If it is not, I slip from the hook and become distracted. Forgetting where I'm reading from I begin to browse through the lines.
Thats how I would write it.
- 1 decade ago
Whenever I start reading a book, I feel as though I am a small fish, lost, in the ocean. I never know where I am or where I am being drifted off to. I just try to find something interesting through the words with some sort of astonishment and being lost. Suddenly, I find myself having to have taken the bait of the author; I am still on the hook if the novel is good. If not, having slipt off the hook, distracted, forgotten where I was, I begin to browse through the lines.
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