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CleanAir asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Baritones and Bourbon?

Just wondering what you think.

I dreamt of you last night,

Baritones and bourbon.

I could smell your skin

smooth beneath my hand.

Blood surges forward racing to reach you…

I woke alone.

Update:

I tried to find a descriptive way to write how your pusle pounds when you come out of an intense dream. I couldn't find anything that seemed right.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    This is cool. It sounds a little random, the first round...but, as you slowly sip away, the true flavors comes through

    ...ahhhh...TD

  • 1 decade ago

    I like it! Good title too, as well as the last line. If you allow me, I am less convinced by "Blood surges forward...", which I find a bit clichéd.

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