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Native English speakers please.How can I organise these sentences to have one single and sound sentence?

My parents and I watched in awe.

We watched on a hot August evening.

Erratic bolts of lightning illuminated the sky.

The bolts of lightning were from a distant storm.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    I have some ideas.

    1) On a hot August evening, my parents and I watched in awe as erratic bolts of lightning from a distant storm illuminated the sky.

    2) Erratic bolts of lightning from a distant storm illuminated the sky one hot August evening as my parents and I watched in awe.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    On a hot August evening, my parents and i watched in awe erratic bolts of lightning from a distant storm as they illuminated the sky.

  • 1 decade ago

    On a hot August evening, my parents and i watched in awe, as erratic bolts of lightning from a distant storm illuminated the sky.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    On a hot August evening my parents and I watched in awe as erratic bolts of lightning, from a distant storm, illuminated the sky.

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  • 1 decade ago

    On a hot August evening my parents and I watched in awe as erratic bolts of lightning, from a distant storm, illuminated the sky.

  • 1 decade ago

    On a hot August evening, my parents and I watched in awe as the erratic bolts of lightening from a distance storm illuminated the sky.

  • 1 decade ago

    on a hot August evening my parents and i watched in Awe, erratic bolts of lightning, caused by a distant storm, illuminated the sky

  • 1 decade ago

    Glenn T's answer will be right

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