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"Unsure" another poem?
She is clever
Yet she has never
Been sure of herself
Doubt in her eyes
A fault in her confident disguise
The doubt in her eyes
Its a bit choppy and needs a little more critiquing but aside from that. Whatcha think?
2 Answers
- Lady CLv 41 decade agoFavorite Answer
It has a nice flow. The only thing I would do is add some more verses between the two lines "Doubt in her eyes and The doubt in her eyes. It a great poem nontheless.
- -closed-Lv 71 decade ago
I agree with the first person. Right now as I read it, it sounds strange hearing the same line so close like that. Maybe adding some lines in between?
Source(s): A person who knows nothing about poetry
