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RZ (LPPBS) asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

I wrote this poem about a year and a half ago. What do you think?

Love me not

Why can't you love for who I am

But you love me when I'm not

Do you love me not

Do you like to see me cry

Hide in a corner and wish that I would die

Do you enjoy my tears

Do you like to watch me shake as you toy with my fears

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    Nice. Try to rework it so you have the rhyme scheme going.

    ie cry die tears fears

  • Ian M
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    I like it.

    You have a gift.

  • 1 decade ago

    i like that one a lot... one of my personal favorites so far... still working on one you posted earlier...

  • 1 decade ago

    Nice but what is it about just kitting but I don't see no meaning.

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  • 1 decade ago

    wowwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats great

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