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Over-reacting is still reacting.

Better then acting like it doesn't matter.

The reaction of reacting is confusing.

Or is it the way I think that's confusing?

I'm lost at this point.

Should I continue to care?

It's not a choice if I do or not,
I just can't help it.

Ugh, I'm thinking too much.,
but it's my reaction.

You're my over-reaction.

Anonymous · Accepted Answer

Everything is fine until 

It's not a choice if I do or not,
I just can't help it. [this just seems meaningless compared to the first of the entry] 

Ugh,[minus the ugh.] I'm thinking too much.,
but it's my reaction.

You're my over-reaction. [this is a wonderful ending]

princess_boricua2003 · Answer

I'm lost but I might be over reacting

Sugar · Answer

Nothing , sounds good, is my reaction

Joe C · Answer

Wow! That was really good!
But even better if it rhymed!
Hope this helps!

phuk it dude · Answer

sounds like you need to work on some sleep.

crib_wizzard · Answer

one thing is proper word usage

Anonymous · Answer

ha! ha! you think your are kate hudson? or reese witherspoon? sorry, chick! you are not!! hollywood bound so do not delude yourself!!

Anonymous · Answer

What?

Stirfryedsushi · Answer

you are trying too hard.

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What do I need to work on?

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