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RZ (LPPBS) asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

2 similar poems?

I wrote these a few yrs ago (back when I had nothing better to do then day dream) Tell me what you think.

The father I didn't have

You loved me like a father

You didn't have to bother

Still you did

In your loving arms

You hold me tight

When I cry at night

And tell me everything will be alright

You'll never let me go

You'll always wipe my tears dry

When I cry

The loving dad I never had

Your like the loving dad I never had

You wipe my tears from my face

And hold me in your loving embrace

You say I may not be you flesh and blood

But I'm your heart and soul

You never had to bother

Trying to be my father

Update:

Why should it be in a different language?

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    First one sounds like you just wanted to thank him second one sounds more heart felt an dflows better, GL!

  • 1 decade ago

    They are great but i would sugest that u type it in another language such as french like this:

    Le papa affectueux que je n'ai jamais eu

    Votre goût le papa affectueux que je n'ai jamais eu

    Vous essuyez mes larmes de mon visage

    Et tenez-moi dans votre aimer embrassent

    Vous dites que je peux ne pas être toi chair et sang

    Mais je suis votre coeur et âme

    Vous avez dû ne jamais tracasser

    Essai d'être mon père

    That was the second one so u know if u want the first translated let me know hope i helped... Bye.

    Idk just to make it more interesting. You dont have to have it in a different language just sugesting things.

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