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Is this a good poem?

The Jump

1980

She jumped from the window…

She died…

Her wings had not fully grown to fly…

Now she has to endure the pain

Of having to grow them all over again…

I hope she doesn’t jump again

Too soon.

Update:

written about a friend who killed herself by jumping from a window

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  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    yes, you captured it! Well done

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    yes, that's awesome! did you write that? it seams like people are always posting this dumb poems about friendship lasting forever, etc. and then i find this little poem! i love this!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    no its kinda creepy and wierd sorry but thumbs down

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    that is a good *** poem ever i like it!! hehe

    Source(s): ahahaha
  • 1 decade ago

    WHY THE HELL DID IT JUMP!?!?!??WTF!?!?! IS IT OKAY???? SHOULDNT YOU GO GET HELP!

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