what do you think? a beautiful poem of saddness.....?

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Warped & Twisted
by Skittles
Harsh words & violent blows
Hidden secrets nobody knows
Eyes are open, hands are fisted
Deep inside I'm warped & twisted
So many tricks & so many lies
Too many whens & too many whys
Nobody's special, nobody's gifted
I'm just me, warped & twisted
Sleeping awake & choking on a dream
Listening loudly to a silent scream
Call my mind, the number's unlisted
Lost in someone so warped & twisted
On my knees, alive but dead
Look at the invisible blood I've bled
I'm not gone, my mind has drifted
Don't expect much, I'm warped & twisted
Burnt out, wasted, empty, & hollow
Today's just yesterday's tomorrow
The sun died out, the ashes sifted
I'm still here, warped & twisted

 
stunning Love...... you... skittles...............

scottsmith20 · Accepted Answer

That's intense but in a good way the emotions the person expresses just run free with sorrow, deeply hurt but still manages to stand, I liked it.

Cat · Answer

Awesome!

Anonymous · Answer

Beautiful stated poem. I find it sad because it reminds me of myself. It brings feelings of happiness and sadness stirred into my soul. My god, it's beautiful.

Anonymous · Answer

Thats an amazingly good poem.
A bit depressing though......
But its still really good :)

x

♣ Ric (everyday people) ♣ · Answer

breathlessly good. I applaud the composer.

giri · Answer

ya very beautiful, where you got that , is it from u itself if so congratulation...

trust in me · Answer

can i print this off of here and frame it? that is an amazing work of art. made me cry. so special. more please!

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