Norwegian Word(s) Deep?

Pardon my ignorance, but who are Ollie and Lena?

So, you are of Norwegian extraction. I will let you off making fun of Norwegian's then. Especially as it is done so affectionately.

In verse three - should it be Yaa's inflection (not reflection)?

I like the poem, but it would be much better if you could make the last word of each stanza's line 2 rhyme with "yaa" (any of the "yaa"s). It would fit the voice of the poem and make the poem fall more easily into a wonderful beat...think about it.

keep writing

There's a famous story about a logician who was presenting his PhD. dissertation, on which he had presumably toiled long and hard. "To sum it up", he said, "there are many instances in which a double negative can mean a positive. But there are none where a double positive means a negative." From the back of the auditorium a sarcastic voice said, "Yeah, yeah."

The Scots use OH for the last one and the Indians say," Gettiup, cowboy!" I like it but I like it better when I'm Ollie.

Yaaaa - lol - good one. Clever play of words at the end. Most enjoyable.

Very clever and funny. Bet you've had lots of coffee today. Is the answer oui or non?

Wow, I love it.

One of the best I've seen in a while.

My compliments.

Very nice:)

Clever, as a painted picture, and a surprise ending.

Giggling! Ooof Da!

(Know it's not spelled properly, but meant well!)

(I can see we'll have to educate Granny.)

Um, yaaa. I think I get it. No matter, it was hysterical and funny. Yaaa, I think I liked it. Good on ya, neonman.