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kissaled asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

A little slice of hellish fun!!!!?

Fire.

A blade of wind hit my cheek,

A deepened violet my skin did turn,

An orange flame my heart did seek,

But hell released that day to burn.

A brown and green rustle up high,

A white knuckle was scraped,

A pulsing red through a vein,

A woollen head was now capped.

A tarred flooded jungle,

A splash of soles did plop,

A soaked man stood still,

Not one has a solid mop.

A revelation in droves,

A hardened soul now beat,

A heart broken by season,

For want of a glowing hearth.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Very descriptive. Thought provoking.

  • 1 decade ago

    Good Morning!

    Nope! Don't wanna be that person, just passed through a storm, but, I'll take the sole with lemon and butter. This sounds like "Survivorman" on a show that went wrong. And, how can anyone survive on just one roasted scorpion for 7 days? I digress....

    Cryptic, enigmatic, easy meter, easy flow...but I'm not awake enough to grab the meaning!

  • 1 decade ago

    Fantastic, simple, rhyming is exceptional, flowed beautifully, I love it.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I think it's pretty good.

    Nice work:)

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