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New poem guys, thought's ???
Decision.
A break through in memory,
A time lost forever,
A mind drawing blank,
Hands clasped together,
Prayer to the lord,
Weakened by fear,
Salvation is coming,
Disguised as a peer,
Alone on his decision,
Peeved by his judges,
Fallen off balance,
His partner he nudges,
The decision is made,
A mind put to rest,
The other cheek is now turned,
The bird in its nest.
5 Answers
- HEARTBOUND♥Lv 41 decade agoFavorite Answer
this is a beautiful poem, i loved it and i understand the meaning of it, which for me personally was very powerful.
Source(s): you have the heart of a poet. - 1 decade ago
I like it but you need to look over your commas. Consider changing some of them to periods so you can read your poem the way you want it to be read. It's also missing something like more to the story or what your trying to say. Good job though!
- Anonymous1 decade ago
This is an intriguing and moving poem. It flows really well and the message is powerful, though enigmatic. It makes me think. I really enjoyed it. Thank you.
- poeLv 51 decade ago
It sounds like the story of Judas and his betrayal, could be wrong. Good poem though. Thanks
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- Anonymous1 decade ago
I like it' as it's really interesting and cool.
