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Poem #5. What do you think?

I wrote this poem while i was sitting outside work waiting for my ride. Let me know what you think.

Parking Lot

Frosted windows,

Cool as ice.

The Parking Lot,

Beneath the lights.

A spot reserved,

For the handicapped.

A darkened corner,

Where the homeless nap.

A single tree,

Awash in light,

Amidst the darkness,

This chill night.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    This poem is wonderful! It painted a picture of the parking lot in my mind! You should submit this in a poetry contest! It needs to be published! Its amazing!!

  • 1 decade ago

    wow you are a really talented poet you should write more or join all poetry which is a web site dedicated to poets and there work i like where the homeless nap

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    You came up with that.

    That's amazing.

    Ye should try and sell it.

    ye could you no.

    The Poem desribes clearly that night, and the sourroundings.

    Maybe you should be a poet..

    Second thoughts...

  • 1 decade ago

    hey that's very inspiring! i may do a painting of that...

    http://jdlovell84.googlepages.com/home

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