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In Frankenstein, “The Phantom of the Opera” and “Carrie” it can be observed that humans judge with ignorance, often, out of fear of the unknown, but they don’t just judge with ignorance, they judge superficially as well

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Both Frankenstein's “The Phantom of the Opera” and “Carrie” carries out the message that humans judge with ignorance and superficiality, often out of fear of the unknown.

  • 1 decade ago

    How about,

    In Frankenstein's "The Phantom of the Opera" and "Carrie", it can be observed that humans judge with ignorance, often out of fear of the unknown, but they also judge superficially.

  • 1 decade ago

    ok

    In Frankenstein's, "The Phantom of the Opera" and "Carrie",

    it is shown that humans judge with ignorance, out of fear of the unknown, and also superficially. Due to(blank, blank) I believie Frankenstein was trying to (blank blank)

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