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kissaled asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Well just a new piece, what are your thoughts?

Does death come to all, for all,

Do we want it or even invite it,

Do troubles seek forgiveness within us,

Does it kill ever slowlybit by bit.

A science can cure most we say,

A man in white will heal a cut,

A woman with pity will soothe your soul,

A reason will come forth, through rut.

Repeat in angst for a priest in stone,

Rouse as you might for truth will out,

Rate a mojour God in all thy fright,

Rage kept in yet hidden with pout.

Eager minds play tricks with lies,

Even solice comes to those who wait,

Evil spirits taunttowards us all,

Ever ready are all us humans to take the bait.

Update:

sorry yes it's title is DARE.

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  • Steve
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago
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    I think the rhyme scheme is good, and I noticed the repitition of the initial letter in each stanza. I find the actual meaning confusing though.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I write and read poetry its ok but not the best nor my favorite

    p.s. write me we could talk about poetry

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Are you going to call this piece "DARE", it's interesting, lol.

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