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kissaled asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Title poem for a new working - thoughts??

Dangerous Lies.

A society unforgiving,

A family unwilling,

Your friends untrue,

Peers just cannot do,

Parents you have shamed,

A heart you cannot tame,

A secret you cannot keep,

An answer you shall seek,

A pain you cannot bare,

A soul that’s just not there,

Words you cannot say,

That’s called being gay.

Update:

Sorry guy's, I'm not actually asking for a title, the title is Dangerous Lies, I just wanted your thought's on the poem itself, but thanks.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    This is a poem with pathos and reflective power. The situation sounds very harsh so it is a very sad poem as well. Are the lies a danger to the self or to the unforgiving society? Either or both, it works well as an enlightening title. Very strong writing. Thank you.

  • ?
    Lv 4
    5 years ago

    staggering Appreciative Motivating crammed with thoughts Fastidious Enthusiastic Stirring Jam-packed of sentiments gratifying gratifying Flattering words are much less 2 correspond the enthusiasm uncovered in this poem. I previous doubt have a good time with this poem by skill of heart!!!! wish this permits :-))

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Good poem.

    As for a solution to the problem ... are you maybe living in the wrong area?

  • jenny
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    This is heart touching, wonderfully written of your feelings.

    Are you asking for a suggeted title?

    "Myself"

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  • poe
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    I think it is a great poem, but I think the lifestyle is very much discriminated against in today's society. Which is very, very heartbreaking. Thanks for sharing.

    Source(s): Published poet
  • 1 decade ago

    "Life Sucks"

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    frozen will to be

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