Is my rap lyrics good enough for big time?

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I'm hanging with the feens
I got lyrical gene's
You can't believe what ya'll see
I'm a staight up G

I got that lyricall genetics
every beat be-headed
you get chopped yeah you hear it
see murder ink I call lyrics
passed like an academic
talk **** you see it mimics
I start spitting you turn gimmick
fresh cap that new-fitted
put the wall on the map grided

I'm hanging with the feens
I got lyrical gene's
You can't believe what ya'll see
I'm a staight up G

ain't a crip or a blood
just a straight up G
sworn to follow the hood codes
older cats showed me
I'm lost not loney
keep it on lowkey
like Game I let it rain
rapping expressing my pain
never did it for fame

I'm hanging with the feens
I got lyrical gene's
You can't believe what ya'll see
I'm a staight up G

THIS IS MY FIRST SONG I PUT OFFICIALLY
ON THE NET LET ME KNOW IF I'M GOOD
ENOUGH TO MAKE IT BIG TIME THANKS!!!!!!!

Anonymous · Accepted Answer

I don't listen to rap music, but I think you've got potential. 
Your lyrics are pretty good, the verses are well structured. 

If you want to make it 'big time' I suggest you just believe in yourself and stay true to your lyrics, that's essential for any genuine musician of any genre. Just be real 'speak your mind' as they say, I think also may be your subject matter is personal on some level but you can take it further as that's what makes a powerful lyrical song. Put all your mind body and soul into it, however cliche that may sound it's true, that's how you get results.  

Be brave and good luck! =)

Bananas · Answer

I think its good considring how hip hop and rap is going these days....i mean i think your better than most that are making it big....

Anonymous · Answer

i think it's alright... but im not really an expert lol...

but im just wondering, what does the word 'feens' mean?

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