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An old working, I am re-publishing - thought's?
A White Light.
A shallow grave uncovered,
A mangled body of blood,
A bone twisted and torn,
A life washed away in the flood.
An eye mirrored in torture,
A grip tightened in foul play,
A mind innocent now strained,
A face shoved in the clay.
A vein severed by blade,
A place cursed and forgotten,
With thoughts it did rotten.
The story now has an end,
Stop digging he just might,
The soul has bounced forward,
Towards a shiny white light.
To be straight, this poem has been published aleady and I am do a best working, I was womdering should I include it.
2 Answers
- DanialLv 51 decade agoFavorite Answer
I'd say that such poem would make the proper song for Pink Floyd . Dark.. descriptive .. missing some balance & rhyming.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
naff
sorry
all those lines beginning with 'A'
try reading a bit more published poetry and see what makes it and what doesn't
