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kissaled asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

I wrote this a while ago, I've never thought it worthy for answers, but now I feel different - you?

They/she.

Why the air we breathe?

Why the flesh we eat?

Why the blood we drink?

Freedom is yet a soul to rest,

Eternal greatness or eternal falseness,

We beg to differ with liberties,

Yet our religion is not dead,

Realise the bells that hang above,

A child’s death is called nothing,

Yet a soul is sacred,

Befall our kingdom cannot become our dream,

But our dream is always our kingdom,

Sleep now the children of mother earth,

But be warned,

The guardians at the watch towers,

Become no mystery when life is near its end.

Update:

Well I like that film, thats why i use that picture.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    The intrinicty of your wording is fantastic, a line after line truth telling of loife in all it's little flaws, fantastic, I was thinking for hours after reading this, well done.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    i would say its the best ive ever read great work but then you wrecked the feel for the poem when i saw that pic of two guys hugging from broke back mountain why???

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  • ?
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    Everytime I read it, I find something new. It is a true statement about what life has become. I need to read more of your works! You have a gift indeed!

  • 1 decade ago

    That's very good!! If makes you think. Which is what it should do, in my opinion. Great job, keep writing!

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  • very good... i'm sure that type of poem would get published actually.. its very insightful...

  • Ados
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    Thats a great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!well worthy of answers.....

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