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kissaled asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

My new poem, for Heath.?

Withering Bloom.

His eyes shining like rain on a mountain top,

His soul great with awe and wonder,

His face graceful and charming,

His look of thinking and ponder.

His life full with art and accomplishment,

His mind running with those around him,

His smile calming and sleek,

His light once shining now dim.

His spirit now faded alas nearly gone,

His aura taken from this world unknown to one,

His feeling's withered like the bloom of a rose,

Heath we love you, even though now you are gone.

Update:

Thank you amy, Im havng alittle cry right now!!

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    Does the light always have to fade in death? Not when there are people like you to write tributes that rekindle them and make them burn bright again. This is beautiful. Thank you.

  • 1 decade ago

    breath taking!!!! well done, Amy is a true poet!!! Kissaled, your words are touching and core shaking!!!!

  • 1 decade ago

    Can't fault you for your intention, but the poem is a non-event.

    And Jack Nicholson is still the top Joker in the pack.

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