Please tell me what you think of this poem...just something I jotted down while mulling through some thoughts?

Aw....Thats really touching. Call me! Just kidding. But seriously thats really sweet. Were you thinking of a special someone becuz that sounds like something you'd mean to tell someone....

I like it!

I think the best pieces of writing are written when 'mulling through thoughts', as they are the most genuine and heart felt and people can generally relate to them in some way. I think a good piece of writing should be more about its meaning than the written quality of it.

However, the writing itself is very good, nice rhyming and some good language (:

crimson Rain - Prince female in crimson - Chris thingy Black night - Deep crimson (Oo 2 for one!) Nights in White Satin - Moody Blues Blue Bayou - Linda Ronstadt purely some that spring to innovations

I will not go and tell you your mistakes cause as you said you were what I call 'free writing'. I am a published poet. That is a good sound idea for poetry. Fix your mistakes and it will sound so much better. Keep writing your thoughts......♥

Not Bad,First two line are repetitious, Needs a liitle polishing.

That is a very sweet poem. Whoever receives that is really lucky. Keep writing!

It's sweet. I think its beautiful. You should write some more becuase you have some serious skills man.

Overall, I guess it's o.k., but the beginning's a little cheesy. Also, I think you mean "met" instead of "meant" in the third section.

Very Cool

I think that is soo sweet. Nice writing. Seems genuine.