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Chaos is less boring then order, War less so then peach. And by peach, I mean peace.?

How's that for the opening line of a novel?

Update:

Anyone less so than throws off is not part of the target demographic.

This statement is a characterization of the mindset of the main character, whose primary goal in life is to not be bored, so the word boring would seem to be necessary, although if anyone has a better way of saying it their opinion is welcome.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    I'd re-read that sentence a couple times... try to make sense of it...

    If you meant to catch the reader's attention, it worked^^

    ... now I want to read that novel.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Sorry but I don't like it.

    The peach peace thing doesn't make sense, but not in a good way. It's just irritating. I have already assumed that I won't like this book based on that sentence. It seems that it's going to be pretentious.

    This is my honest first impression of that sentence.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    good not great. Could be better. I think the word boring throws it off and less so than confuses me for a moment

  • 1 decade ago

    Intriguing. I would definitely keep reading.

  • reader
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    With all due respect, it is entirely inane.

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