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Twilighters!!! Jacob fans!!!!?

Okay, I made this completely up! And, I have read all 3 out so far and I KNOW what happened, I just decided to make something different, but I do love Edward...and Jacob.

"I know that I love you, and sadly I'll never love anyone else." Jacob said, pulling be closer to his hot chest. I sighed. "I love Edward, forever. Although you cannot stand it, trust me, I know that you can't; I have loved Edward since I met him." He gripped my arms tighter and wrapped them around his neck. "Please Bella, give me a chance. I can be just as good a boyfriend as that leech." He whispered. I shook my head. "But, what if I do give you a chance? What about Edward?" My voice started to break and tears welled up in my eyes.

"Forget him, that's it. All you have to do is forget him." He told me. I closed my eyes. "But, I don't think I could do that. It was too hard before." A tear trickled down my cheek and fell onto Jacob's shoulder. He couldn't see me cry, but he must have felt it.

Update:

"Yeah, I know it was hard before, but I was there, wasn't I? I loved you when he didn't, I-." I stopped him. "He did love me! He wanted to protect me," then I realized it didn't work out very well, "but, it didn't do a very good job." I said. He held me tighter. "Bella, give me a chance, please. I'll never leave you." He said as he kissed my cheek.

Update 2:

"I'll always be here for you. I promise I'll never hurt you, or anything!" He said as he pulled me away from him.

The tears were streaming down my cheeks. He wiped them away. "You've known me for so long, and I've always been here for you. Right here." He seemed so nice and gentle, I've actually never seen him like this.

"Please Bella, give me a chance." He whispered again. I closed my eyes and kissed his cheek. "Okay."

Update 3:

So........ what do you think?

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  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    Awesome one prob. im NOT team jacob im all for edward!!but to sayy....i loved it stephenie would've written that for all i know if you hadn't told us it was you!!=)

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I like it! I really can't decide in between Edward and Jacob... It's good, but you want to put it in situation more, like in the middle of a war when there's only so much time left.

  • edeker
    Lv 4
    5 years ago

    individually I actual have consistently been a vampire fan yet my females have a super argument approximately this each time they see something bearing directly to Twilight. 2 are team Jacob and one is team Edward

  • 1 decade ago

    She can put it up here and ask what we're thinking bout that!!!!

    I love it!And I love Jacob!But i think Bella don't deserves Jacob so I'm glad that she's with Edward (she don't desevers Edward either but whatever)

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  • 1 decade ago

    I hate fan fiction. Let the author write the book! And I don't like Jacob, I'm on Team Edward. But your writing is good, if that's what you want to know.

  • 1 decade ago

    Awesome, I ♥ Jacob to

    and your piece of novel

    should atchully be in the twilight series

  • 1 decade ago

    i like it!

    good job i love jacob too!

  • ?
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Very good.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    omg talk about another book u people are getting me to hate the book when i like it

  • 1 decade ago

    i really like it

    =)

    good job

    =)

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