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What does your crazy quilt of your life look like?
A crazy quilt of my life would be wonderful for me to see
No one else would have it, unique,one of a kind, Me
The size would be queen and heavy to keep you warm,
To wrap tight yourself in during a nasty storm.
I would divide it up in sections, each a special place.
Some would be tattered, some delicate Irish lace.
The colours would go from dreary gray to bright sunshiny yellow
There would be hues of all the blues,pinks some sharp, some mellow.
Passionate reds throughout it all, forest greens everywhere you look..
Areas would be black and white like the pages of my favourite book.
Crazy, unique,over-stated it would definitely be
After all, my crazy quilt is suppose to depict me.
Appreciate the input.I don't know how to go back and edit it.
Appreciate the input.I don't know how to go back and edit it.
4 Answers
- neonmanLv 71 decade agoFavorite Answer
Some great images and your first two lines...extremely strong. You change tense in the third? This has much merit but to me it needs some more editing to make it "real crazy." Examples:
Some would be tattered...others Irish lace
Colours from grayest gray to brightest yellow
Blues in all hues. Pinks...soft to bold
As to my quilt... quite ordinary. I am trying to add some color though!
Get back to work now and make this one really bounce!
- 4 years ago
Guilt truthfully has non secular factors, it is for useful. I t could be useful, whilst guilt keeps you from repeating errors of the previous, whether that's unfavourable too, which includes whilst one person tries to guilt-holiday yet another for inner maximum benefit. exciting question... EDIT: Oh cover, no longer guilt. wager I ought to've examine closer. Yeah i'm able to work out what you're asserting there, my life sounds like a loopy cover now and returned, even with the indisputable fact that my life hasn't been as loopy as yours. nevertheless, around each and every 5 years my life transformations in some direction I on no account might've envisioned 5 years in the past. life is extraordinary, it takes you in extraordinary guidelines.
- mom.of.2Lv 51 decade ago
I love it. It is very creative to see a life, compared to a quilt.
Thanks for sharing. I hope to see another poem of yours again. This one was both interesting & good.
Source(s): not an expert, my opinion. - Bayard LadyLv 61 decade ago
Great! I'm delighted you ventured forth...mine is yet on the sewing table.
