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what do you think of this poem?
made by our class
The Square Root of 3
I’m sure that I will always be
A lonely number like root three
The three is all that’s good and right,
Why must my three keep out of sight
Beneath the vicious square root sign,
I wish instead I were a nine
For nine could thwart this evil trick,
with just some quick arithmetic
I know I’ll never see the sun,
as 1.7321
Such is my reality,
a sad irrationality
When hark! What is this I see,
Another square root of a three
As quietly co-waltzing by,
Together now we multiply
To form a number we prefer,
Rejoicing as an integer
We break free from our mortal bonds
With the wave of magic wands
Our square root signs become unglued
Your love for me has been renewed
3 Answers
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Ignore the negative comments. The concept of a lonely square root of three is good. Made by the whole class, the effort is quite good. Especially I liked the mention of 1.7321.
- 1 decade ago
The idea is boring.
Rhyming is good, but the rhyme scheme is forced.
You could use some more internal rhymes or alliteration.
Something. I hope this is for school. Only in school would this pass.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
very nice and dramatic; thanx for sharing